You don’t hear too much anymore about killing the press release.It was all the rage for the last two years to talk about the need to murder the poor helpless press release.
The gist of the argument is that in our digital media world – the press release is an archaic relic of the days when PR consultants mailed press releases to editors and reporters (and then went out to hunt mastodons with spears).
You can hit this link to read The Silicon Valley Watcher’s Tom Foremski’s rant of press releases called “Die! Press release! Die! Die! Die!” (a headline which is grammatically incorrect, but that’s a post for another time).
Todd Defren at PR Squared supports the rather poorly named Social Media News Release – which is basically a list and a lot of links.There’s some pros to this approach, but the biggest negative is that it doesn’t allow companies to provide context to the news they are announcing.
A lot of complaints about press releases are legitimate.Press releases are guilty as charged for containing too much spin, featuring meaningless quotes from executives, and failing to deliver clarity because they are cobbled together by too many cooks in the kitchen. Companies also inject too much marketing and technology speak into press releases.The typical press release is written for the market department by the marketing department.They should be focused on the intended audience (After all, who really uses words like “leverage” and “paradigm” in real life?).
But supporters of killing the press release like Foremski make a big mistake.They assume that press releases are written for the press.But they aren’t anymore.In our digital world, press releases are written for everyone: media, analysts, customers, prospects, partners, and even employees.In the age of Google searches, press releases are just as likely to be part of the list of results as a news article.That’s also why Social Media Marketing Releases fail – because they don’t provide an opportunity for storytelling.
That’s why we shouldn’t be killing the press release just yet.Rather than kill it – let’s save it.Because of their wide reach – press releases are even more important today than they were 10 or even 20 years ago.We just need to return to the basics.Use the press release for its intended purpose: to share information.
Here are some ways that Racepoint Group counsels our clients on how to approach writing a press release:
·Focus on the News Value – The purpose of a press release is to broadcast a piece of news.So don’t bury the most important part of the release in paragraph five.The news needs to be front and center – the primary focal point.
·Short and Pithy Wins – Long press releases have little chance of being read – by anyone.The reason press releases turn out too long is because it is difficult to write short.But at a time when attention spans are shrinking – any release longer than two pages has little chance of holding a reader’s attention.
·Links Help – Make sure the release contains hyperlinks to Web content that will add another dimension to your news (links to podcasts, web content, news articles, videos, forums, and even other press releases).Some readers will want to understand the ins and outs of the technology or read a long history on the company.Rather than put that content in the release – put in a link instead.It helps with readers who want more detail and has the added bonus of driving traffic to a company’s web properties.
·Don’t Market Your News – Readers – even business readers – don’t want spin.They want straight forward information.So leave the marketing and technology jargon out of press releases.
·English As a First Language – When writing press releases think Ernest Hemingway rather than William Faulkner.That means using simple, declarative sentences written in an active voice. Leave the long, stream of consciousness work for Pulitzer Prize winning Southern novelists.
Question: How can you spend $2.7 million in 30 seconds?
There are two more slots open for advertisers in the 2008 Super Bowl, and they are now going for almost $3 million a piece. When you think about it, Fox has to charge that much for each ad – it’s the only event on television where people still watch the commercials. Many people recorded shows like “The Office” and “CSI “(before the writer’s strike) and watched them while skipping the advertisements. During the football games on now, people use the commercials to run to the kitchen and grab a bag of chips. No one pays attention to them at all.
However, the Super Bowl is the one event where people actually watch the game for the commercials. More then 90 million people are expected to watch the game, but how many of them are really interested in the game. Sure, Patriots fans will be intently watching as the Pats go for 19-0, but there are millions and millions of people who are watching for the halftime show and the commercials, and are running to grab chips during the game. With this event (it’s really not just a game anymore) sure to draw viewers during the commercials, companies are using it as their yearly splurge. USA Today reported that Fox has lined up about 30 advertisers, including Kraft (for the first time in 10 years), Audi (for the first time in 20 years), and Anheuser-Busch, who purchased four minutes of ad time for $10.8 million.
Now we just have to make it through the Justin Timberlake halftime show…
Personality #1: A $15 billion corporate empire. More then 57 million inhabitants or roughly the size of South Korea. The future of targeted advertising. The Next Google.
Personality #2: The place to be for social interaction. A hip hangout for college kids, created by hip college kids. The next Sigma Phi Epsilon.
Facebook has Multiple Personality Disorder…
How else can you describe the way it handled the controversy surrounding its heralded new Beacon advertising program. Mr. Z and Co. had a problem on their hands when Moveon.org and 68,000 users cried anti-privacy after finding out that Beacon was an opt-out program that was almost entirely impossible to opt out of. Then Coke said “Try Pepsi,”and people realized that even if they weren’t Facebook users other sites may be sending their information to Facebook.
So how did Facebook respond? Want to know?? Still waiting??? It didn’t, for nearly three days. Some comments from non-executives through text messages and emails floated around, but Mr. Z and the rest of his executive team were nowhere to be seen. Maybe they were looking in the mirror trying to figure out who they were or what they had become.
Their no-response made them seem like those Sigma Phi Epsilon brothers. You could almost hear them saying, “If you don’t like what we’re doing here then leave, we didn’t really care if you were here in the first place.”
And with this no-response the media was unleashed. It had been waiting for this. The company that it build up over the last year. The glowing features from David Kirkpatrick and co. along with the equally glowing cover stories. Mr.Z even made the cover of Newsweek. It was time to to bring him and Facebook down in a fiery crash.
Those of us in the media business saw it coming. David even channeled New York Times columnist and former Masterpiece Theatre host Russell Baker with his observation on the scenario
“The press rarely grants an Autumn reprise for those it loved in the Spring.”
His colleague Josh Quittner called for Facebook’s tombstone with this headline – RIP Facebook?
Reporters were flocking to take down the giant as Josh illustrated nicely ”There’s so much blood in the water it’s attracting more sharks (reporters).” Until finally Mr.Z responded with a blog post to apologize and allow users to completely opt-out of Beacon. So although we still couldn’t see or hear the elusive Mr. Z, this was a start. The Blog at least somewhat read like he was the man running personality #1.
It’s not going to get any easier from here on out as he continues to run a $15 billion corporate empire and it’s time to do away with personality #2. It’s time for him and the rest of his fraternity-loving executive team to grow up and lead this company. Embrace personality #1 and let your user base embrace personality #2. Believe me we won’t let you down, we’ll keep it hip. We won’t let Facebook die as long as you don’t kill it for us.
The whole story of Facebook really defines our generation and I’m telling you first hand; the college and post-college crowd isn’t going anywhere…Like many college alums I have started to dabble in other social networks for “professionals” like LinkedIN, but Facebook keeps pulling me back in. Why?
Because it’s about cultivating relationships with people I already know and have shared 3:00 a.m. bleary-eyed discussions with. You’re more likely to hear “I Facebooked him/her” at last call then “I Googled It.”
Slowly after some time the college crowd will start to go back less frequently but they will still check-in from time-to-time and the next generation of college and high school students will carry the torch along with the business folks that are now making Facebook the melting pot that it is today.
Yeah, it started out as a great hook-up tool for frat brothers but it has evolved into so much more. Involving your friends in everything you do online; is what Facebook has already turned into. It’s even more actually. It’s the tool to include your friends in everything you do in your life.
As long as Mr. Z doesn’t let the site become overly commercial, let’s users have the final say on their relationships and shows up in situations like this; Facebook will continue to be the company that we’re talking about next year – For all the right reasons, hopefully.
This shouldn’t come as a surprise given the fact that Google’s been dominating headlines with its recent AIM and Apple iPhone partnerships. For me, this most recent partnership means I can get the best of both worlds.
Having been born with zero directional sense, I am subject to getting lost within a two-mile radius of my house. So, to cut down on the “I-don’t-know-where-I-am” disgruntled phone calls from the car to my boyfriend, he kindly decided to buy me a TomTom.
I’ll admit I’m not usually an early-adopter of technology, but after a few days I was hooked. While the technology isn’t always perfect (sometimes you’ll be more successful just looking at an old-fashioned map), it usually gets me there and I can leave my phone turned off.
A huge fan of Google Maps (if you’re a runner, check out thislink). and now a faithful TomTom user, I couldn’t be happier that they’re joining forces to make sure I get there without the many detours my trips entail.
Now, it’ll be just as easy to connect to and send info directly from Google Maps to my TomTom device. And instead of making regular pit stops to ask for directions, I’ll arrive at my destination–on time.
